hi everyone as i promised here is the FULL continued version of my story
Hello. come and listen, for i have an exciting tale to tell. My name is Lee. i live on the farthest star from earth, millions and millions of galaxies away from the planet Earth. Everyone on my star has Powers. Anyway, i have a tragic story of how i discovered Earth, and here it is...
so, i was at my home, cooking a sweet tart for my sisters birthday... she is turning 3,000 (that would be like three to you ) then mother came home from work. she is a cook at the cafe of our town. That is why i happen to know so much tasty recipes. As mother walked into her room, father was helping my two sisters, Lilly,(the birthday girl) and Abby out of the van. as mother came outside to help father, i simply turned back to kneading the dough. the radio in my sisters room was blasting away, to the point where i heard a severe weather report. the man said that the planet was nearing a black hole...OH NO!!!! I Screamed and dropped the dough on the cutting board and ran as fast as i could.. the sky was turning black and the wind went insane... i ran to the van to warn my family... mother and father and my two sisters were staring at the sky, getting darker and darker. I cried, " mom, dad, the radio in Abby's room said our star is nearing a black hole, sound the alarm!!!" mom looked at me with tears in her eyes. she said, " Lee, go get your coat right now, and i will meet you inside... go , NOW!!! " . i ran to our house as fast as i could, my cheecks stinging in the fierce wind. i grabbed my jacket and my backpack and ran to the window. oh... where was the van? where was my family, what had happened? i thought... should i stay in here or run out?
I decided to stay in my home. I was saying to myself,"The Bible says to do everything your best but i don't know if i am doing this my best. I'm trying to decide what to do." So i stood there, close my tearing eyes and folded my sweating hands. I cried, "god, i am so confused. i just lost my family and all my mother told me to do was go inside and put on my coat, and she would meet me inside, but when i ran in and put on my coat, mom was not there. When i looked out my window the van was gone. everything was gone. Please, help me, i don't know exactly what to do. Thanks for everything god. Amen. I unfolded my hands,dripping sweat. This was one of the hardest things i have gone through. I couldn't stop thinking of terrorible things that could happen to me. I wonder, are any other people expieriencing what i am at this moment?
Probably not. Oh, i was so scared . Then it hit me. I had a plan.
I grabbed my biggest suitcase. Then i ran to the cuppboard . i grabbed all the water bottles our family had. Then i ran to the sink and filled them all up , one by one.
then i took all the food we had that didn't need to be refrigerated, and then I stuffed it into my suitcase. then i got a sleeping bag, rolled it up, and stuffed it in there too. then i grabbed all my clean clothes. then i decided i didn't need them really. i should leave room for more important things. then i ran to my bedroom. i sighed and flopped onto my bed. then i stood up. i walked to my desk. i looked at the picture of my family sitting on my desk. i grabbed it and stuffed it into my suitcase. I packed and prepared for two hours. then i grabbad my keys, ALL my money, and headed out of the house. i locked all of the doors. then i ran, sadly into the empty city. For now , this would be my life. i will get used to it. someday.
From Ross, that was very good. From Grandma Denise, I thought that was wonderful. I can't wait for the next chapter to see what happens.
ReplyDeletethank you soooooooooooooooo much for commenting!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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